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Beauty and the Beast Chapter 1

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Journal Entry: Mon Nov 9, 2009, 5:26 PM


So...

Yes, I'm still flipping a little over the whole journal skin thing. However could you tell?

But I actually have a point for this journal. I'm actually kind of curious about what you guys think about my new story, Underneath, so far. I'm wondering what you think of Crowley, Autumn, Chris (A.K.A. Sociology boy), and their relationships with each-other (although Crowley and Chris have no relationship so far).

I'm having second thought because, when this story popped into my head a few years ago, I had a really bad nightmare, which is where Crowley's character came from (nice, huh?). And I kind of saw him as this really creepy jealous stalker type dude. Which is why I could never get more than two or three chapters in before I would end up deleting the whole damn thing just because Crowley pissed me off so much.

Now Crowley has been revamped into that sulky guy we see in the posted chapters, but I'm kind of wondering if I shouldn't have gone the creepy stalker route. Because my original plot just doesn't work with the new Crowley. Which means I'm in the process of coming up with a new plot and less people are going to die, which I find a little disappointing.

So what do we think? Is Crowley a good guy as is? Should he be creepier? Should I just forget the whole damn thing?

Let me know what you think!!

-PiratePhantom




  • Mood: Stumped
  • Listening to: Time Forgets - Yiruma
  • Reading: Canadian Drama text
  • Watching: Myself Type

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:iconpoopapapapalpatine:
Thanks for the fave, already!

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Ib'tuur jatne tuur ash'ad kyr'amur!
:iconpiratephantom:
No problem :)

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:music:I don't want to feel like this, so that makes it all your fault:music:
:iconaphostol:
Many thanks for the fav =D

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:iconpiratephantom:
No problem :D

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:music:I don't want to feel like this, so that makes it all your fault:music:
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O_o not to be pushy or anything....
BUT WHERE IS CHAPETER 21?!
I'm dying!

...hurry :excited:

:heart:

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